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Post by ÈpÓçh on Jul 31, 2009 14:28:24 GMT -5
There's already an Artificial Immortality shirt... i didn't know that. I like that shirt! I would like to have one with the rest of the lyrics i mentioned on it. But I would definitely get this shirt, dont get me wrong.
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Post by Ferd Berfel on Jul 31, 2009 14:33:28 GMT -5
.............................. its not an english paper its a fast post on a forum.... i typed that in like 1 minute cause i had other things to go do lol. let me fix it for you... SWEET! Can’t wait for a shirt! I can’t wait for the song!!! I am all for a shirt for artificial immortality with I am not a mechanism, I’m part of the resistance. I am an organism, an animal, a creature on the front with some cool design/picture and I AM A BEAST on the back. better? NOPE! Try this: SWEET! Cant wait for a shirt! I cant wait for the song!!! I am all for a shirt for Artificial Immortality with "I am not a mechanism, I'm part of the resistance, I am an organism, an animal, a creature" on the front with some cool design/picture, and "I AM A BEAST" on the back. Like that. Chris THANK YOU. My God, I was beginning to fear that everyone here had forgotten the rules of grammar.
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Post by Josh on Jul 31, 2009 14:37:01 GMT -5
whats grammer!
<.<
lol
I'll behave.
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Post by Scott on Jul 31, 2009 16:58:09 GMT -5
NOPE! Try this: SWEET! Cant wait for a shirt! I cant wait for the song!!! I am all for a shirt for Artificial Immortality with "I am not a mechanism, I'm part of the resistance, I am an organism, an animal, a creature" on the front with some cool design/picture, and "I AM A BEAST" on the back. Like that. Chris Sorry, dude. You're way off. Try this:
Smith 1 Scott Smith J. Wisdom BTA 300 31 July 2009 Necrotizing Fasciitis [Indent]I can not wait for the shirt. I can not wait for the song, either. I believe a shirt for "Artificial Immortality" would be pleasant, featuring the words "I am not a mechanism; I'm part of the resistance. I am an organism, an animal, a creature" on the front (with an interesting graphic, perhaps) and "I am a beast" in capitol letters on the back. Some final touches added.
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Post by xasaintx on Jul 31, 2009 17:47:08 GMT -5
NOPE! Try this: SWEET! Cant wait for a shirt! I cant wait for the song!!! I am all for a shirt for Artificial Immortality with "I am not a mechanism, I'm part of the resistance, I am an organism, an animal, a creature" on the front with some cool design/picture, and "I AM A BEAST" on the back. Like that. Chris THANK YOU. My God, I was beginning to fear that everyone here had forgotten the rules of grammar. I could have gone even further and changed the structure to make it less fragmented and more easily understandable but I figured it'd be best not to hit him with too much at once. Sorry, dude. You're way off. Try this:
Smith 1 Scott Smith J. Wisdom BTA 300 31 July 2009 Necrotizing Fasciitis [Indent]I can not wait for the shirt. I can not wait for the song, either. I believe a shirt for "Artificial Immortality" would be pleasant, featuring the words "I am not a mechanism; I am part of the resistance. I am an organism, an animal, a creature..." on the front (with an interesting graphic, perhaps) and "I am a beast" in capital letters on the back. Some final touches added. Some final, final touches added. Chris
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Post by phillip on Jul 31, 2009 18:56:46 GMT -5
Sorry, dude. You're way off. Try this:
Smith 1 Scott Smith J. Wisdom BTA 300 31 July 2009 Necrotizing Fasciitis [Indent]I can not wait for the shirt. I can not wait for the song, either. I believe a shirt for "Artificial Immortality" would be pleasant, featuring the words "I am not a mechanism; I'm part of the resistance. I am an organism, an animal, a creature" on the front (with an interesting graphic, perhaps) and "I am a beast" in capitol letters on the back. Some final touches added. I'm sorry Mr. Smith, but your syllabus clearly states that plagiarism will not be tolerated. You will now be removed from BTA 300 and your transcripts will show that you failed the course.
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Post by ÈpÓçh on Jul 31, 2009 20:07:22 GMT -5
THANK YOU. My God, I was beginning to fear that everyone here had forgotten the rules of grammar. I could have gone even further and changed the structure to make it less fragmented and more easily understandable but I figured it'd be best not to hit him with too much at once. Chris what are you saying??? lol. Oh and how do you multi-quote things?
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Post by xasaintx on Jul 31, 2009 20:19:28 GMT -5
I could have gone even further and changed the structure to make it less fragmented and more easily understandable but I figured it'd be best not to hit him with too much at once. Chris what are you saying??? lol. Oh and how do you multi-quote things? I'm saying.... that I probably have too much time on my hands. And I multi quote by cmd clicking the different quote buttons which opens them all in separate tabs then I copy and paste them all into one. Chris
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Post by ÈpÓçh on Jul 31, 2009 20:21:30 GMT -5
what are you saying??? lol. Oh and how do you multi-quote things? I'm saying.... that I probably have too much time on my hands. And I multi quote by cmd clicking the different quote buttons which opens them all in separate tabs then I copy and paste them all into one. Chris ok thanks.
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Post by metahead on Aug 1, 2009 9:47:37 GMT -5
where can that shirt be found?
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Post by Ferd Berfel on Aug 2, 2009 2:53:37 GMT -5
*sniff*
This board makes me so proud! You're all wonderful people. Truly, truly wonderful people. Passing grades for everyone! Except for Scott, who was sadly dropped from the course due to plagiarism.
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Post by Scott on Aug 2, 2009 7:40:25 GMT -5
At least I got to post the Chapman Stick video.
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Post by clareabel on Aug 3, 2009 9:15:39 GMT -5
Nice artwork for the song
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Post by Jeremy on Aug 3, 2009 10:13:40 GMT -5
woah. i like that!
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Post by synchesis on Aug 3, 2009 11:12:33 GMT -5
There's a clip of the finished version of Necrotizing Fasciitis on BTA's myspace now, in case anyone didn't already know. I like the production a lot; the vocals sound similar to those on Vampire Mooose's Serenade the Samurai.
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