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Post by N/A on Apr 5, 2011 16:07:04 GMT -5
You’re arrogant at best Even if you can’t keep up with the rest You certainly try Can you tell me why? It’s pitiful the way you view yourself Some elite force of pen and prose Achieving nothing actually worthy of note No one is listening And if they are they’re surely laughing You’re shouting Armageddon But nothing’s f**king happening Save a tree and put away your pen Leave the saying to what’s already been said Reality and what’s going on inside your head Like oil and water over and over again
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Post by behemoth on Apr 6, 2011 13:20:18 GMT -5
Interesting, is there a backstory behind this?
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Post by N/A on Apr 6, 2011 15:18:10 GMT -5
It's me being critical of my own writing, actually.
Ironically, I actually am really pleased with how this one came out.
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Post by Muffy on Dec 24, 2011 0:14:00 GMT -5
You know what else goes really well with oil and water?
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Post by N/A on Sept 15, 2015 0:20:41 GMT -5
HAHAHAHA WHO WROTE THIS s**tTY POEM
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