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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Oct 20, 2006 13:28:25 GMT -5
.. are alright. I thought it'd be a nice addition to Heretic's Haikus thread. The rules for a limerick is 5 lines. Lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme with the last words. Lines 3 and 4 last words rhyme.
Wings spreding far and wide,
Humans scurrying in buildings to hide.
Harpies are soaring in our midst,
Feasting upon the living in the mist.
Leaving the village, they continue to glide.
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 20, 2006 14:53:22 GMT -5
white trees glistens with wight snow.
the children dancing makes a great show.
the snow is as big as the palms of my hands,
and stays on the ground whenever it lands.
I pity the men who are going out to row!!
OK, so explanation! well, its snowing! and I'm pumped! and I'm wet! and as for the "men who are going out to row" part, well, the rowing team at my school is actually really good for being in its 2nd year, all thanks to the coach, who was an international rower for Canada. well, hes really "hard core" about rowing, and despite the snow, is still making the boys team practice!! poor boys......
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Post by Heretic on Oct 20, 2006 18:31:39 GMT -5
Anger burns within my eyes
Cold rain falls out of these skies
My sword be drawn, this battle won
The slain lie in their blood
Awaiting the lights of maggot-flies.
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 20, 2006 18:44:53 GMT -5
uhh.... Heretic, blood and won doesn't ryme.....  |
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Post by foreverlost on Oct 20, 2006 19:10:07 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure this is a limerick...
When I close my eyes
Your voice is there telling me lies
Confusing thoughts, and no hope
I know Jesus you'll help me cope
Even though my heart still cries…
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 20, 2006 19:26:06 GMT -5
yes, it is... and a good one! foreverlost, I love your writing! keep posting stuff!
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Post by foreverlost on Oct 20, 2006 19:49:37 GMT -5
Thank you
I'll try and post more. My writing comes from my head.
Can't always garentee I'll have some.
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Post by foreverlost on Oct 21, 2006 15:57:30 GMT -5
Your still not here…
This might be confirming all my fear…
I know you were never there
I know you never cared
I look at my foolish self and want to smash the mirror.
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foreverlost
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Post by foreverlost on Oct 22, 2006 14:13:05 GMT -5
Look at the people down there, all covered in mud
Someone needs to clean them, send them a flood
I don’t think they deserve your grace
But then again, I look at my own face
I realize I didn’t deserve your grace to save my blood.
I cover myself with a shield of hate
Because I’m scared to look at my own fate
I know you say your there
To hold, to love, to share
But sometimes I feel like I’m just bait
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 22, 2006 20:34:06 GMT -5
I have been in this dungeon too long,
And my throat is riped from singing the same sad song.
I cover myself with black cloth's.
It's got holes in it made by the moth's.
I wish I had taken the escape from my old wrong.
Not the best, Limericks aren't my talent.
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 22, 2006 20:47:29 GMT -5
Drink and daces in this dance hall.
Our leave we shall try to stall,
For tomorrow morn' we set sail.
Lord we pray we don't fail!
Let us come back to dance again next fall.
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Post by lordconsumeme on Oct 23, 2006 20:54:11 GMT -5
i cant rhyme
i tried it once to pass the time
it's something i could never do
oh i see you write and envy you
my attempt to rhyme should be a crime...
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Post by foreverlost on Oct 24, 2006 16:38:18 GMT -5
i cant rhyme i tried it once to pass the time it's something i could never do oh i see you write and envy you my attempt to rhyme should be a crime... That was awsome! haha I really liked it! |
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Post by lordconsumeme on Oct 24, 2006 20:18:00 GMT -5
i cant rhyme i tried it once to pass the time it's something i could never do oh i see you write and envy you my attempt to rhyme should be a crime... That was awsome! haha I really liked it! lol thx |
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Post by foreverlost on Oct 25, 2006 6:33:42 GMT -5
lol It made me laugh which is pretty good. I was thinking...now thats and awsome limerick!
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