Film-Grain

[radar]

Black, billowing smoke blocks out
the sky as it falls toward Earth.
Women clutch shrieking children
who are wrestled from their arms.

Please move,
I can’t see the screen.

Fences
Helmets
Dogs
Stars

Excuse me,
when is the test?

Wheels in rhythmic harmony
spin on a rusted train track.
Boxcars filled with somber riders
depart for a final stop.

Blood isn’t real in black and white
& Death is softened with film-grain.

[Shiv]

I like it

Better than most of the generic drivel posted here

[notavailable]

Yeah, yeah, yeah.

Whatever d00d.

I liked it too. Reminded me of "Deleted Scenes" by Nasum.

[phillip]

I want to make this into a song. I especially liked the blood and death part.