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Post by Josh on May 8, 2010 22:33:59 GMT -5
I finally broke out of a long writer's block. the song is meant for a spacy progressive metal song. Listened to some Cynic for some inspiration.
Wheel of Eternity
Wheel of eternity Spins in everlasting force Circulation Turning our fate to its will Forced to become the spark of subconscious In a dream so forlorn Truth lost among the stars Drifting behind this closed door.
Hide thy face in darkness Strip thy mortal coil Embrace forever.
Whatever was a part of this life, now gone never again to look on dawn this is the end Nothing shall remain, but dust to be thrown against the void Memories to be forgotten be no more.
Mirror of Time Reflecting the only mystery this world has to offer a life so darkened in silhouettes slowly appearing before us journey back to the stars Become the avatar of light Reclaiming our will to dream.
Look in thy eyes of divination Bow before thy wings Embrace forever.
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Post by Josh on Jun 27, 2010 13:45:40 GMT -5
bump
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Post by phillip on Jun 27, 2010 22:38:25 GMT -5
Wheel of Morality turn, turn, turn. Tell us the lesson that we should learn.
The phrase "this world has to offer" is pretty cliche. Consider revision.
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Post by Josh on Jun 28, 2010 12:23:19 GMT -5
Its a work in progress, but thanks for pointing that out. I'd love some music to be put with these lyrics. I seriously want to start a prog band one day..its so hard to find good musicians that want to start a prog band.
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Post by Josh on Jun 28, 2010 23:15:02 GMT -5
Wheel of Eternity
Wheel of eternity spins in everlasting force. Circulation, turning our fate to its will. Forced to become the spark of subconscious In a dream so forlorn. Truth lost among the stars. Drifting behind this closed door.
Hide thy face in darkness. Strip thy mortal coil. Embrace the unforeseen.
Whatever was a part of this life, now gone. Never again to look on dawn, this is the end. Nothing shall remain, but dust to be thrown against the void. Memories to be forgotten. Become no more.
Mirror of Time, reflecting the only mystery this world cannot see. A life so darkened, in silhouettes Appearing before us. Journey back to the stars. Transform into the avatar of light. Reclaiming our will to dream.
Look in thy eyes of divination. Bow before thy wings. Embrace infinity.
here's a better revision of the song.
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