And so it ends...
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Through the eye of a needle I watched you die...
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Nov 3, 2005 18:09:33 GMT -5
Post by And so it ends... on Nov 3, 2005 18:09:33 GMT -5
A bit of my poetry...
"Never Forget"
Smoke billowing through the air, Silent screams thrown to the sky, How could something so inhumane fall upon us Like this?
The clouds rained fire and ash, Bodies fell from rooftops, Trying to find closure and safety, But soon finding an endless sleep.
Will any of this be forgotten? I pray not... ...I pray not
Men and women fighting for our safety. Some call it freedom, but being bound by this Pain and fear is not freedom to most. I know now why the 'stripes of freedom' on Our flag are red..
---Never forget 9/11--- --In loving memory of all who fell in this tragedy, and in remembrance of all our troops--
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And so it ends...
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Nov 3, 2005 18:10:55 GMT -5
Post by And so it ends... on Nov 3, 2005 18:10:55 GMT -5
"Love"
The thing called love is One-of-a-kind. Love is more than a feeling, More than words, More than actions... I don't think anyone truly knows what 'love' is, because When I try to explain it, or even try to fathom How great it is..The endless words I think of, can not Compare to the feelings I share with her.
To me, love is amazing, love is pure, love is harmless, love is forgiving, love is forever-growing. If you love someone, you can let them go and They'll always come back. If they don't return, you never had them to begin with.
When I look into her eyes, No words can describe the feelings That come to life inside my body. It seems like everything around us stops, and It is just me and her.. What we share together...that is love. Yes..that is love!
((Dedicated to the most amazing girl I know. Katrina, I love you! And I always will!))
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And so it ends...
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Through the eye of a needle I watched you die...
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Nov 3, 2005 18:12:46 GMT -5
Post by And so it ends... on Nov 3, 2005 18:12:46 GMT -5
...If you have comments, feel free to post...
Also, if you've got poetry you'd like us to read, then post it! I love reading & critiquing others poetry.
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Nov 3, 2005 20:30:38 GMT -5
Post by John on Nov 3, 2005 20:30:38 GMT -5
I thought they were really good, especially the first one.
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Nov 3, 2005 22:35:14 GMT -5
Post by Solid on Nov 3, 2005 22:35:14 GMT -5
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emodemon
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"I may be sadistic but i'm still a living, breathing, being and i have feelings too!"
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Nov 28, 2006 14:36:41 GMT -5
Post by emodemon on Nov 28, 2006 14:36:41 GMT -5
This an antidrug poem to be exact an anticrystal meth poem i wrote for health class tell me what you think! Servant of Death
I am a servant of death I am called crystal meth I come in many forms I am not pure I can be made of many things From household cleaners To fuel for camping Do you still want to try me?
You think you’re using me But I am the one who is using you You try me for a quick high To be more energetic and alert But one try is all that it takes To generate all the problems that I can create
I am a bringer of pain People get hurt and even killed because of me The things I’ll cause you to do In order to obtain me and that perfect high Is there no end to my terror?
I make it seem that all your problems disappear But what will you do When death comes for you? If not death then living in a hell for sure My effects are permanent so hold on tight The road’s only about to get bumpier
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