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Post by phillip on Jun 16, 2006 12:18:08 GMT -5
This is the first song I wrote for mine and FAVIO!!!!'s band... Hopefully we can get it recorded soon. (A lot of the vocals are death metal, but not all... or at least thats how I plan it) We also have most of the guitar parts written... tell me what you think.
Fallen Angels
Your teachings sink into my heart, but they're no longer in my soul. I have forsaken my first love, rejected your wisdom.
I won't go back, I can't turn back now! I've gone too far, without you.
(chorus 1) Fallen Angels. Forgotten Seraphim.
I wander these ruins looking for truth, I can't tell it apart from lies. I will keep searching until I find it, or it finds me. Or maybe I'll just find myself.
(chorus 2) Fallen Angels. Forgotten Cherubim.
My heart trembles at your word, as you lift me from this vast abyss I have called home, the synagogue of Satan.
Now I weep for my lost brothers, for I am no better than them, I have been saved and they have not, but they had their chance, so long ago.
[end]
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Post by Heretic on Jun 16, 2006 15:33:43 GMT -5
That's actually really good. It reminds me in part of Ravage Ritual by Zao in a way, but it's different than that. Keep it up!
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Post by phillip on Jun 16, 2006 16:41:32 GMT -5
Ravage Ritual by Zao in a way never heard of that song, lol. Thanks
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Post by Favio!!!!! on Jun 16, 2006 19:17:06 GMT -5
i see a type o............yeah u mean i made up most of the song parts and u helped put them together....but i give u credit for righting the song though
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Post by phillip on Jun 16, 2006 19:41:27 GMT -5
We also have most of the guitar parts written... WE do have most of the guitar parts written, as in most of the song is ready to be recorded, not as in I wrote most of the guitar parts.
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Post by Favio!!!!! on Jun 17, 2006 1:47:09 GMT -5
i am just messing with u chill out.but it wasnt that part it was "buth they had they're chance, so long ago." that part of the song the last line
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Post by phillip on Jun 17, 2006 10:27:16 GMT -5
You coulda told me that earlier FAVIO!!!! hehehe.
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Post by Favio!!!!! on Jun 17, 2006 19:42:23 GMT -5
because i dont know....thats why
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