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Post by kodemyster on Aug 14, 2006 2:30:07 GMT -5
The days go bye, darker and darker they get As does my heart, goes on and on, darker and darker it gets If I could take back the pain I would If I could change I would But being lost beneath these ashes just cuts me deeper and deeper And just like the ashes, so does the fear
Im living this death, no future confronts me, no place shows comfort Every turn, every choice turns to dust The very thought of life leaves me demented The very thought of seeing the light, turns to blood What was passion turns to hate, what was hate turns to fear So does it start again, a winding circle of twisted hate
When I think there is no hope, when I know there is no surrender The fog parts, the shadows hide, and suddenly His Love surrounds me
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Post by kodemyster on Aug 15, 2006 2:46:37 GMT -5
feedback!!
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Post by Solid on Aug 15, 2006 11:41:30 GMT -5
Good! Keep writing.
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Post by empyreanishardcore on Aug 17, 2006 15:20:32 GMT -5
i liked it, check out mine
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 4, 2006 21:19:59 GMT -5
OH MY FREAKING GO(SH...)!!!!! that is totally awesome! keep it up!
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