Wheel of Eternity

[Josh]

I finally broke out of a long writer's block.
the song is meant for a spacy progressive metal song.
Listened to some Cynic for some inspiration.

Wheel of Eternity

Wheel of eternity
Spins in everlasting force
Circulation
Turning our fate to its will
Forced to become
the spark of subconscious
In a dream so forlorn
Truth lost among the stars
Drifting behind this closed door.

Hide thy face in darkness
Strip thy mortal coil
Embrace forever.

Whatever was a part of this life, now gone
never again to look on dawn
this is the end
Nothing shall remain, but dust
to be thrown
against the void
Memories to be forgotten
be no more.

Mirror of Time
Reflecting the only mystery
this world has to offer
a life so darkened
in silhouettes
slowly appearing before us
journey back to the stars
Become the avatar of light
Reclaiming our will to dream.

Look in thy eyes of divination
Bow before thy wings
Embrace forever.

[Josh]

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[phillip]

Wheel of Morality turn, turn, turn. Tell us the lesson that we should learn.

The phrase "this world has to offer" is pretty cliche. Consider revision.

[Josh]

Its a work in progress, but thanks for pointing that out. I'd love some music to be put with these lyrics.
I seriously want to start a prog band one day..its so hard to find good musicians that want to start a prog band.

[Josh]

Wheel of Eternity

Wheel of eternity
spins in everlasting force.
Circulation,
turning our fate to its will.
Forced to become
the spark of subconscious
In a dream so forlorn.
Truth lost among the stars.
Drifting behind this closed door.

Hide thy face in darkness.
Strip thy mortal coil.
Embrace the unforeseen.

Whatever was a part of this life, now gone.
Never again to look on dawn,
this is the end.
Nothing shall remain, but dust
to be thrown
against the void.
Memories to be forgotten.
Become no more.

Mirror of Time,
reflecting the only mystery
this world cannot see.
A life so darkened,
in silhouettes
Appearing before us.
Journey back to the stars.
Transform into the avatar of light.
Reclaiming our will to dream.

Look in thy eyes of divination.
Bow before thy wings.
Embrace infinity.


here's a better revision of the song.