foreverlost
Junior Member
I'm forever lost to you... to him and even to my saviour.
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Post by foreverlost on Oct 25, 2006 6:34:47 GMT -5
Koigokoro, I also really like the limericks that you posted. Your very talented.
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 26, 2006 18:23:26 GMT -5
Thank you! You are as well!
Has anyone noticed that no one has really been on the art's section lately?
Also, has anyone noticed that limericks are hard to wright?
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Post by Darkone on Oct 26, 2006 19:17:41 GMT -5
lol I havn't been on the boards lately....*hangs head*
But all the limericks I've read while catching up are AMAZING! lol
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Post by Heretic on Oct 26, 2006 19:53:56 GMT -5
I'll watch the tears fall from your eyes And I'll steal the sorrow from your cries That they push through you To strip the joy from you I'll defend you from their lies...
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Oct 27, 2006 12:12:44 GMT -5
uhh.... Heretic, blood and won doesn't ryme..... Yeah it does, I think so anyways. Blood, won.. they rhyme.
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Oct 27, 2006 12:13:43 GMT -5
I'm pretty sure this is a limerick... When I close my eyes Your voice is there telling me lies Confusing thoughts, and no hope I know Jesus you'll help me cope Even though my heart still cries… foreverlost that's really good.. keep posting stuff!!
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Oct 27, 2006 12:20:34 GMT -5
Heretic that's a really good limerick! I'm happy everyone is liking this post.
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Oct 27, 2006 13:48:28 GMT -5
To see your sweet gaze, Among all those in a daze. I miss your love, You sent me spinning down, from above. Thanks for such a long phase.
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Oct 27, 2006 13:54:06 GMT -5
Here's one for all those who can read french:
L'amour est le seule chose, Je te donne une rose. La fille est lesser, La mort, lui consumer. Le noir, nous attirons.
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 28, 2006 13:29:50 GMT -5
yes, well.... Ghost I'm not going to argue with you, but they don't sound like they rhyme to me. sorry, that sounds accusing... it's not meant to be.
you slaughtered my people and my kin you burned our houses and tattooed their skin And now I wander, opposing you. Evading you and not believing in you. For I know that you are truly sin.
that is somewhat based on my book...... not that good. I can't wright Limericks very well.
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Post by lordconsumeme on Oct 29, 2006 18:44:50 GMT -5
Running Running i can't get away from you, All I try there is nothing i can do, Your on me like grass and morning dew, You want to spill my blood, But i shall defend myself you brood, You shall be the one that i shal have slew...
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 29, 2006 19:02:47 GMT -5
The faeries are all around me. There not there but yet I see. They shout at me to go away. But despite there protests I still stay, And they decide to dance for me! OK, I'm all pumped because I just had the best time in my life were I got totally reconnected with God and there were faeries who danced for me and then God explained Preliminary to me!! IT WAS SO !#$(%&^ AWESOME!!! ;D !!!!!!!! Edit: Preliminary is me trying to remember how to say Purgatory.
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Post by Koigokoro on Oct 30, 2006 19:55:27 GMT -5
Fallen solders around where I stand. Broken swords and dead horses scatter the blood stained land. Bury the fallen where they lie. No marking will they have, after they die. And the boats pull away as I watch from the sand.
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foreverlost
Junior Member
I'm forever lost to you... to him and even to my saviour.
Posts: 70
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Post by foreverlost on Oct 30, 2006 21:01:27 GMT -5
My feelings are like a hollow hole I have no hate, no love, no real control I try to understand these feelings in me But I always end up wanting to flee God don’t let me run, this time love me, find me, search my soul
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Post by lordconsumeme on Nov 1, 2006 0:45:46 GMT -5
The undead begins encircleing me, Ripping and tearing and makeing me bleed, I grab my chainsaw and start it quick, I push it forward and watch their bodies break and rip, Now these zombies shall pay with their rotten corpses and they shal wonder why they would not jsut let me be.
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