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Post by Koigokoro on Nov 9, 2006 21:43:49 GMT -5
split personality's are fun. I think I have one... but ya, there's no evidence supporting my theory... unless you count me seeing myself and... OK, I'll stop. it's hard to explain, even in words. But no, give limericks a try, there really fun!
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Smalltowngirl
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Post by Smalltowngirl on Nov 9, 2006 22:37:32 GMT -5
I probably have one or two in my book there pretty bad though if I can find them I'll post them for you
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Smalltowngirl
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Post by Smalltowngirl on Nov 9, 2006 22:49:59 GMT -5
Ok I found some but there not exactly limericks with mine lines 1 and 2 rhyme and lines 2,3,and4 rhyme
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 10, 2006 13:54:31 GMT -5
Smalltowngirl, I've read yours during class. They're pretty good but you should definitely give limericks a try. If you need the rules go to the first post on this thread that I made. They're all stated there.
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 10, 2006 18:09:06 GMT -5
How the light flew out of your eyes, The last eve in the midst of our sighs. This was the last time I saw your face, With it's swiftness and grace. And this is my last lament in my cries.
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Heretic, you will understand this moment perfectly. You were there. Love you!
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Smalltowngirl
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Post by Smalltowngirl on Nov 10, 2006 21:50:54 GMT -5
He says he loves her, But she is unsure. Why does he love me, When he was stronger feelings fo thee. How mush more pain shall I have to endure.
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Post by Darkone on Nov 10, 2006 22:33:59 GMT -5
Heart of Worship Hands are raised We worship and praise Jumping Laughing Words to describe this feeling can’t be phrased!
Heaven I see you Lord I feel you In my little place I can see your beautiful face People without you don’t have a clue
Your beautiful grace I am surrounded in your embrace Never let go Let your love and wisdom flow I want to be able to touch your face…
Lord I see you I want to stay with you I know that I will be with you forever one day I just need the words too say I love you… I just went to a city wide youth rally and it was AMAZING! Those are just some of the things I was thinking afterwards!
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Post by xcalubur on Nov 11, 2006 15:04:41 GMT -5
forced eviction of light today terror come's forth thus we pray the light is lost but why and at what cost the end is close on this day
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Post by xcalubur on Nov 12, 2006 13:14:47 GMT -5
why do we live this life to continue is but a strife we ponder our mistake's not real, not ourselves, but fake's our stuggle's ended by man's knife
within the dark of night we often loze sight we misplace our hope and often fail to cope without a guiding light
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 12, 2006 19:17:19 GMT -5
You guys are getting better all the time! Nice work
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Post by xcalubur on Nov 12, 2006 21:16:18 GMT -5
haha thanx you should put some of your work up her too
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 12, 2006 21:26:46 GMT -5
I do all the time, hehe.
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 12, 2006 21:30:34 GMT -5
As the twinkle in the clear drops, The corpse just rots. Those cry over it, As it drops into the pit. And the tears cease to stop.
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Post by xcalubur on Nov 12, 2006 21:48:39 GMT -5
forged in the depths of the soul as dark and black as coal it works our minds into devastating bind's it is sin and it take's it's toll
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Post by Heretic on Nov 13, 2006 8:15:22 GMT -5
With glaring eyes they declared my sin Pointing fingers at things beyond their ken And though they couldn't make me break, I still cry out on this stake "I am the Heretic, and I shall live again!"
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