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Post by lordconsumeme on Nov 1, 2006 0:48:37 GMT -5
First they attack me, Now all they do is cry and plee, Beg for mercy but they shall not receive, But none shall hide the truth none deceive, So many foes it seems like a dream...
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 2, 2006 14:02:26 GMT -5
Lordconsumeme you limericks are very well done! And Koigoroko, the french one doesn't seem to rhyme but trust me it does.. Poison tears fall down my face, Haunting are the souls, fallen from grace. Gaunt and ornately coloured eyes, Adjacent for view are the memories I so despise. Leave me alone to have some space.
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 2, 2006 14:05:24 GMT -5
Lies are what I've done, Contempt and deceit are the game I haven't won. To get back on your feet, You must not continue this deceit. Please forgive me, and my redemption has begun.
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Post by lordconsumeme on Nov 2, 2006 22:18:21 GMT -5
Lordconsumeme you limericks are very well done! And Koigoroko, the french one doesn't seem to rhyme but trust me it does.. Poison tears fall down my face, Haunting are the souls, fallen from grace. Gaunt and ornately coloured eyes, Adjacent for view are the memories I so despise. Leave me alone to have some space. ty u too...
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 3, 2006 14:16:14 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 3, 2006 14:24:24 GMT -5
You put on my face so many smiles, Yet though we're apart by so many miles. Forever you will remain true, My big brother, only you. Rejoined once more we shall, there's no denial.
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This is for you my beloved big brother and protector.
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Post by Heretic on Nov 3, 2006 16:25:50 GMT -5
Ten thousand men won't keep me from your side I pledged all my strength, and by that I abide Through the clearest eyes Through the dying sighs Upon the braying beasts of Dys you'll ride.
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This is for my little sis. You know who you are.
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Post by lordconsumeme on Nov 6, 2006 19:00:14 GMT -5
Ten thousand men won't keep me from your side I pledged all my strength, and by that I abide Through the clearest eyes Through the dying sighs Upon the braying beasts of Dys you'll ride. ~ This is for my little sis. You know who you are. o thank you (ya i know it's me)...
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Post by lordconsumeme on Nov 6, 2006 19:11:29 GMT -5
Before I could not run fast anough away from you, I would sprint as fast as I could away from you because that's all I knew, But you saved me and turned me around Now i can't run to you fast enough your love all abound, You stand now before me open arms ready to recieve me into your love into...
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Post by lordconsumeme on Nov 7, 2006 22:20:36 GMT -5
i like these little poems we do, i use them for influences for songs...
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 8, 2006 14:37:42 GMT -5
Yeah I do too! I enjoy these so much. I'd like to start writing songs again but I need my computer again! Oh well. Keep it up guys!
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 8, 2006 14:52:19 GMT -5
The flakes fall in great clumps, Upon the ground there is many bumps. Hail to the mystic beauty of the snow, In the night's gleam, it is quite a show. Upon your smile is makes many lumps.
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 8, 2006 14:55:12 GMT -5
A requiem played for you, The sound of my guitar so true. Tears are bled, And many bow their head. Hark the angels as they call, leaving us feeling blue.
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Post by Ghost (Samm) on Nov 8, 2006 14:56:29 GMT -5
A tear shed, Strength not weakness to be bled. Remember to stay strong, With us you will always belong. Please remove your stains of crimson red.
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Smalltowngirl
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Post by Smalltowngirl on Nov 9, 2006 20:28:54 GMT -5
You guys are all awesome at limericks I can't right poetry that good I wrote one peom a while ago but everyone says it makes me sound like I have a seperate personality
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