bleh
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Post by bleh on Oct 27, 2009 21:37:32 GMT -5
So I wrote this thinking about this girl,me and her are really close and well..well hell the poem explains it.Basically if I send this to her is it just an impending doom because it's terrible poetry (If it is even that) or do you think it will actually do some good? Oh and yes i wrote this poem talking to others but really just for her,which explains the ending. Some say we're emo, But is that name actually crude? Everyone says we are weird, I say we're just screwed. She has one that she loves, I love her just as much. She will always long for him, I'll always want her touch. She understands, But i cant comprehend. She makes my life better, And i'll love her til the end. I've broken promises, She hasn't broken one, So she's better than me, And my love for her still runs. She's a radiant light in my world, But in hers im just a spark. I want to be there for her, But she's left alone in the dark. She has mood swings, Im only depressed, When we talk together, Its an emotional mess. I want her to love upon, Yet know im safe in her arms. I fear inability to fix her heat, Its broken and i do nothing but more harm. I wrote this for no reason, Its a pathetic poem and that is true. You deserve much better than this, But its the only way i can say That I love You.
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Post by Brent on Oct 27, 2009 22:06:23 GMT -5
absolutely without a doubt the lamest thing I have ever read
I think I'm going to harm others because of it, it's that bad
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Post by notavailable on Oct 27, 2009 22:12:15 GMT -5
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runny
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I am cool or something.
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Post by runny on Oct 27, 2009 22:58:14 GMT -5
Who the f**k are you?
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Post by alastairjohnjack on Oct 28, 2009 0:19:07 GMT -5
He didn't introduce himself, so really there is no clue to go by.
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Post by Jeremy on Oct 28, 2009 0:36:25 GMT -5
An emo love poem now haunts my soul These guts they ache as thunders roll Emotions sir and whisper clean Is this love that I ............ ha, nevermind. it's just gas.
*FFFFRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTT*
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Post by clareabel on Oct 28, 2009 5:22:21 GMT -5
HAHAHAHAHAHA
Whose amazing alt is this?
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Post by alastairjohnjack on Oct 28, 2009 6:59:03 GMT -5
Clare, you amaze me - spreading the guilt off your own hands with such ease is.
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Post by Josh on Oct 28, 2009 9:56:13 GMT -5
Its clare's alt.
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Post by Jacob on Oct 28, 2009 21:49:14 GMT -5
This has got to be a joke,unless we have a middle school kid on our hands?
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Post by Josh on Oct 28, 2009 22:08:20 GMT -5
No its to good for a middle school child to do that.
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Post by Jacob on Oct 28, 2009 22:54:37 GMT -5
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Post by Josh on Oct 28, 2009 23:02:14 GMT -5
:I
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Post by Jacob on Oct 29, 2009 11:47:27 GMT -5
Undetected Sarcasm?
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Post by Josh on Oct 29, 2009 12:19:46 GMT -5
Maybe.
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