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Post by shredmetal777 on Nov 22, 2005 21:01:15 GMT -5
Both of the poems are awesome solidstate!!! Great work man!!!
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Post by Solid on Nov 24, 2005 3:21:54 GMT -5
I like it. Good job. One thing...instead of "What don't kill you", make it "What doesn't kill you"...but I'm sure that was just a little typo, but I pointed it out to feel special...no, it didn't work.
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Post by John on Nov 24, 2005 14:39:06 GMT -5
I agree with solidstate about "What doesn't kill you" But it is great! Keep the good work.
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Post by shredmetal777 on Nov 24, 2005 18:05:52 GMT -5
Yeah,I'll change it to what doesn't kill you, thanks for the feedback!!!
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Post by John on Nov 25, 2005 23:16:13 GMT -5
That was really good!
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Post by shredmetal777 on Nov 25, 2005 23:31:10 GMT -5
Thanks man!
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Post by Solid on Nov 26, 2005 0:12:32 GMT -5
*thumbs up*
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Post by John on Nov 28, 2005 17:39:49 GMT -5
Is it about a person who is going hrough a time in his/her life and just wants to end it, but then he/she realizes that the pain God bore is way greater than anything he/she could ever bare and then God comes and comforts him/her. If you haven't noticed I am terrible at explaining things so I was probably way off but, Oh well.
By the way it was good I liked it.
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Post by shredmetal777 on Nov 28, 2005 17:43:18 GMT -5
Your right John, thanks for the feedback!
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Post by John on Nov 28, 2005 21:47:01 GMT -5
Your right John, thanks for the feedback! Really? I was right? Woo hoo.
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Post by Solid on Nov 28, 2005 22:44:58 GMT -5
Is it about a person who is going hrough a time in his/her life and just wants to end it, but then he/she realizes that the pain God bore is way greater than anything he/she could ever bare and then God comes and comforts him/her. If you haven't noticed I am terrible at explaining things so I was probably way off but, Oh well. By the way it was good I liked it. What he said... ;D
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Post by shredmetal777 on Dec 13, 2005 18:08:43 GMT -5
Comments are appreciated.
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Post by John on Dec 14, 2005 14:09:30 GMT -5
Nice!
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Post by shredmetal777 on Dec 14, 2005 15:40:14 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by crazywaffle on Dec 16, 2005 23:14:02 GMT -5
i think it's awesome. I didn't see anything that needed changes. Good job!
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