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Post by In Christ, the metalhead on Jan 27, 2006 16:49:58 GMT -5
I love it!
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Post by crazywaffle on Jan 27, 2006 21:09:44 GMT -5
It rocks!!!
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Post by Solid on Jan 27, 2006 23:49:44 GMT -5
Well, I didn't write this one...there's no way I could. It was the Spirit. I really enjoyed my time with God writing this.
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Post by shredmetal777 on Jan 28, 2006 12:45:32 GMT -5
Well, I didn't write this one...there's no way I could. It was the Spirit. I really enjoyed my time with God writing this. That's awesome,spending time with God is amazing!!!
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And so it ends...
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Through the eye of a needle I watched you die...
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Post by And so it ends... on Feb 9, 2006 13:47:18 GMT -5
"Untitled"
Dusk became dawn and dawn became dusk in the ever-thickening shroud of ash. Bombs and bullets screamed in the darkness, fire rained all around.
The sun didn't dare penetrate the night, it seemed this massacre would never end.
Darkness clawed at any available flesh, leaving no one erect in its path.
~Phil
comments accepted
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Post by Solid on Feb 9, 2006 18:05:59 GMT -5
I like it, but I'm kinda vague on what it's about. Is it metaphorical or straight literal?
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And so it ends...
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Post by And so it ends... on Feb 15, 2006 13:47:45 GMT -5
solid, it is all literal. it is talking about war...if you didnt know. lol.
heres another...
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And so it ends...
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Post by And so it ends... on Feb 15, 2006 13:51:08 GMT -5
"Through the eye of a needle"
With shards of broken memories you've pieced me back togethor. Naked frowns have overtaken smiles. Through the eye of a needle I watched you die. With a gun in my hand I asked her why. The weak have overtaken the strong and the poor have outdone the wealthy. With a hatchet and a hammer everything's gone away. Nail the coffins shut and burn the forests down. Cover our tracks and slip away with no remorse.
(I do not know at all what this is about, i just wrote and came up with this...)
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And so it ends...
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Post by And so it ends... on Feb 15, 2006 20:31:39 GMT -5
My poetry website. Gonna get my own domain name in a while, but for the time being this is my site-- www.freewebs.com/philscornerjust poetry and random stuff...but please check it out! if you happen to sign the guestbook let me know you're from the BTA boards...
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Post by Solid on Mar 2, 2006 20:05:46 GMT -5
When Time Ceases, Eternity Begins
"Buildings will burn Believers will turn Families will fail Widows will wail"
This is only birth pains Of the terrible times to come Many will turn away Many will be succumbed Close your eyes for a minute A day later, it's still there No escape of the end to come Now is the time to prepare We were warned to watch out And we'll fail this simple deed Prepare to embrace your end Whatever it may come to be The day is coming soon The Son of Man will descend Look towards the high heavens For that will be the known end He will come in glory He will ride on the clouds He will bring His angels Not burdened by the shroud Rejoice With Your Victor
Raise your arms in praise Raise your hearts to the Lord The battle is over forever Keep on moving forward The defeated enemy shall hate us The King cradles our lives The weak have conquered Our lives have been revived Everflowing grace - eternal Oh, God of my fathers sing Sing to me Your song of peace Hide me under Your wings Reign forever, reign supreme Lead our hearts to Your love Embrace us with Your wonderous glory As Your angels dance above
I really needed to share these. As always, all glory to God.
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Post by gravedefier on Mar 4, 2006 12:55:15 GMT -5
Both are awesome!
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Post by Solid on May 9, 2006 0:40:43 GMT -5
Lasting Scars
Even the best of us make mistakes But I still feel like the worst I blame the passion in the air From the start, the relationship was cursed I have only myself to hate And everyone’s life to destroy Her life was so precious to me I treated her as a toy Because of me, a life has ended I was so blind, I couldn’t see I was such a stupid fool To kill my loving wife to be My heart has been shattered That’s nothing that latex can protect I will bear these lasting scars They’ll become my life-long defect This is not the act of true love Because it all ended in regret Heed the words of the mourning man His tears show the hidden agony Save yourself for your wedding day So you might avoid the unending scar’s debris
It's something I wrote for a sex ed assignment (who'd a thunk it?), and it's about a man that was carrying an STD, didn't know it, and ended up killing his fiancee. I won a shirt for this little poem, hehe, anyways, all glory to God! Enjoy.
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