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Post by crazywaffle on Jan 6, 2006 22:59:52 GMT -5
Dude, that rocks! I love it!
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Post by shredmetal777 on Jan 6, 2006 23:00:50 GMT -5
Mine or the other guys?
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Post by crazywaffle on Jan 6, 2006 23:04:48 GMT -5
Yours!
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Post by shredmetal777 on Jan 7, 2006 11:59:13 GMT -5
Thanks!!!!!
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Post by shredmetal777 on Jan 8, 2006 16:10:03 GMT -5
Thanks for the kind words,I really like your writing,also!
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Post by createsalvation on Jan 8, 2006 21:25:55 GMT -5
Thank you!
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Post by crazywaffle on Jan 10, 2006 18:08:51 GMT -5
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Post by createsalvation on Jan 18, 2006 1:12:17 GMT -5
Hey, thanks alot!
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Post by In Christ, the metalhead on Jan 19, 2006 21:03:15 GMT -5
So, yeah, this'll be my first poem to post on the forum besides the Christmas one, if you count that, but it was more of a letter... so anyways, i had the inspiration to write this, and i posted it on my myspace as a bulletin, and i thought i'd post it here also, for ya'll to read. Tell me what you think.
---Beautiful Pain---
Blood covered sight, Betrayal, Stumbling on, Questioning of his father, "Lord, why have you forsaken me...!?" ...Heart wrenching pain, Ripping of flesh, Crown of thorns, Smell of death, Pierced side, Broken cross, All these things, To save the lost, Did not have to happen But did, Because of his great love, His love is amazing, Wonderful, Mighty, Beautiful Pain...
a perfect man who died, to save the imperfect, his blood covered our sin, so we may never have to die again.
He defeated Death at the cross for those that trust in his name, who have faith of what he did. What an awesome God...
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Post by crazywaffle on Jan 19, 2006 21:10:38 GMT -5
It rocks!!! Man, all you guys are good at writing poems!
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Post by In Christ, the metalhead on Jan 19, 2006 21:29:11 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by shredmetal777 on Jan 19, 2006 22:16:25 GMT -5
I love it,it's awesome,and so true!!!
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Post by createsalvation on Jan 20, 2006 13:31:18 GMT -5
Good job man!
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Post by Solid on Jan 27, 2006 2:26:01 GMT -5
Grave Digger
Day after day, I come to my grave Time after time, to repeat the same thing Shovel in hand, my sight on the tombstone No knowledge of when the day is coming Thoughts of the surrounding eyes Race through my burdened mind Some corpse shall be laid to rest And its unworthy, grave digger am I Into the cold, unfertile ground Slides the edge of this old tool Splinters run through these tender hands Past times enter the mind of this fool Now, I’ve reached the haunted end To find the exit is past hope This foolish and stupid grave digger Finally reached the end of his rope My grave is dug, my life is over I’ll sleep forever alone and hurting The sound of steps enter my ear A man has offered his hand surely He picks me up out of my pit I have a chance to live again A tear in his eye, he says his goodbye Into the grave, I have shoved him in Upon the tombstone lies the name of the Savior In place of the choices of my regret For three days, we will grieve without Him Eternally, my spirit will never forget
...so, what do you think?
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Post by shredmetal777 on Jan 27, 2006 16:43:45 GMT -5
That's Awesome!!!!!
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